name: joe dobzynski jr.
work: general
comments: "shannon's use of metaphor is astounding. from her long poems to the three short lines of poetry, you can see how well the metaphor comes together to paint the picture that shannon sees. coming across a feeling of being lost with some art statement like 'we don't know what's going on, do we?' is rather nice. the purpose is simply being lost, at a crossroads. the effect - splendid."